This story was very nice, and a very intriguing idea! However, I must critique the quality of the writing.

Overall, your writing style, your structure needs work. You employ a very odd method of writing in some places, they aren't abundant, but as a writer myself of an extensive and large fanfiction project of my own design, I quickly noticed some errors that are not deal-breakers, but they are noticeable enough to call my attention to them. Perhaps others will indicate the errors themselves, but for now, I'll just give my final thoughts on this story.

I liked this story a lot! Trixie's characterization doesn't really suit her in my mind because of how independent she is, even if her parents were killed in such a horrible way or for such a horrid reason, I can't see her relying on anyone but herself to get the job done and tear into the one(s) responsible the most for it. She'd probably fail, but she'd likely do it to save the value her name holds where it is known.